tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post3486547473684974627..comments2023-05-31T10:47:00.444-04:00Comments on Poetrepository: Keen ObserverMary Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-56599657966444777572018-04-22T07:28:12.125-04:002018-04-22T07:28:12.125-04:00I love the way you have developed what I might cal...I love the way you have developed what I might call a hybrid Golden Shovel: long lines which bring the specific examples or narrative, interleaved with the one-word lines which carry the intent of the original quote. It feels different than the "elaborated" GS form and it's working, maybe particularly for young readers.Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-11475805012120068422018-04-18T18:30:37.716-04:002018-04-18T18:30:37.716-04:00I love the dual ways of looking/seeing that this p...I love the dual ways of looking/seeing that this poem celebrates, and how it dovetails into growing as a person as the quote suggests.tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-2121633666244519382018-04-18T06:40:07.168-04:002018-04-18T06:40:07.168-04:00Ain't that the truth. And isn't it wonderf...Ain't that the truth. And isn't it wonderful that this is precisely what you are modeling for your students each and every day. xoMichelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-67081837727278417162018-04-17T21:40:53.933-04:002018-04-17T21:40:53.933-04:00I sense a growth mindset theme emerging in this po...I sense a growth mindset theme emerging in this poem and the one yesterday, I think it was. As always, I love the inspiration quote. Glenda Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020745976555044975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-73253941379560604802018-04-17T09:59:12.335-04:002018-04-17T09:59:12.335-04:00I love that you've turned this into a mandate ...I love that you've turned this into a mandate for being present and awake and mindful...Liz Garton Scanlonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17941516645386392684noreply@blogger.com