tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post648690227580684578..comments2023-05-31T10:47:00.444-04:00Comments on Poetrepository: Driving HomeMary Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-51121355217943130932015-12-25T16:14:31.037-05:002015-12-25T16:14:31.037-05:00Mary Lee, and I concur. While I read the prose pie...Mary Lee, and I concur. While I read the prose piece I thought of how beautiful it was in its intent. May I place this haiku in the winter gallery (first off, I need to complete the fall one-some offerings got lost in cyberspace so I am retracing my steps).Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-24854647699550392142015-12-24T21:07:02.564-05:002015-12-24T21:07:02.564-05:00I completely agree with Carol. Lovely! The pairin...I completely agree with Carol. Lovely! The pairing of the haiku and poetic prose reminded me of haibun. It is so abundantly clear that you are part of that landscape, and it is part of you.Steve Petersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07307772474856131942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7578454697877614703.post-30519141161275134642015-12-24T10:07:20.414-05:002015-12-24T10:07:20.414-05:00Mary Lee, both of these pieces of writing are bea...Mary Lee, both of these pieces of writing are beautiful. The second one reminds me of Pilgrim at Tinker Creek. I love your use of "you." And the image of the plate, and the inverted bowl above it. Gorgeous. <br /><br />My haiku (ish) poems today are based on your comment about my writing from yesterday. Not sure they are really done, but I need to head out for Colorado Springs and am not sure what the rest of the day will look like. <br /><br />remains scattered across yard<br />such a hard decision<br />ending your ancient life<br />(C) Carol Wilcox, 2015<br /><br /><br />your ashes scattered across backyard<br />Earth reminds me of my brazenness<br />i have ended an ancient life.<br />(C) Carol Wilcox, 2015<br /><br /><br />Somber browns and grays<br />remind me of my brazen act (brazenness?)<br />i have ended an ancient life.<br /> (C) Carol Wilcox, 2015Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.com